I wish you weren’t so fond of me,
With your mocking cruel gaze;
Who does the sand fool, being turned over,
It seeps through the same hour glass always.
Laughter that crackles,
Revealing the hollow within;
A numbing silence precedes,
An empty noise so deafening.
I thought of you today,
That moment when it felt you didn’t care;
Keep looking back once in a while,
In search of that hiding lonely tear.
I like keeping them to myself now,
As I bleed some more;
A salty stream, bearing some of me, some of you,
Rain seems strangely comforting after a storm.
Cold water tingles over a burning soul,
A piercing mist struggling to break through;
Colours return to the pallet soon,
But you shall forever, remain my blue...
8 Comments:
Blew me away, short-stuff.
I stand humbled about my writing prowess.
Mars, I get the feeling at times that you'll prove me wrong, and I won't say about what.
Keep fluttering butterfly, you write best in the rain.
*Awe* ..I'm touched! :)
And most inquisitive as to what you choose not to say of :P haha..
..*flutter* ;)
HNY!!
Ray....Translate plz :S ...lol
Happy
New
Year
!1111!11oneoenoenone!
Haha... It is SUCH an interesting abbreviation! Just adore planting it everywhere ^_^
oOOOooOo! HapPy New Yearr to you too! :)
hmm...theres only one maria i know whos known as mars...so hey :) and thanks.
yea, i write sometimes...dont know much bout the blogging world tho.
Hahah if I was planning on being that direct, or if I even had such an in-your-face answer to start off with, I would certainly not have written it such, no? fewl :P
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